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Roots and branches.

Journal Entry: Sat Sep 29, 2012, 2:48 PM
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There are smiles with ashes flavor
and sad halves that are windblown
days can tarry, and hours hide away
claws can cuddle and birds show a bad side.

There are shadows that hide our faces
and others that grow with the flames behind us;
the more intense the fire, more dense the hell
the more colors we see, the more beautiful are the freaks.

Sometimes we clear those shadows by turning off lights
then looking at the mirror we find quiescence
we intoxicate ourselves from it and we can dream
become a friend of us: Darkness.

I've seen branches growing twisted
others that nail down as splitted stakes
both of them suck from the crimson amber
and grant slumber between death a life.

Be afraid; is called insanity
and walk alone; a wasted life
call yelling to the past; an arrhythmic song
and throw kicks to wind; childishness

Bones and flesh and a lost key
leery we safeguard the alchemy inside us
we're a science that gave up.
Incomplete and broken, we seek tuning.

Stop spinning meaningless,
look at the sun no blinking,
kick in the ass to destiny,
and wake up or keep lying down
...let the time live.


Yeah, just nonsenses XD...(at least it does rhyme in spanish XP)
I was in the mood to write a little...why to post in an journal?...IDK I didn't feel like submitting as part of my art XP but still wanted to share it (even with my horrible english).

Tomatoes only $1 so you can throw as many as you want to your monitor :>

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Modified by BokuRaC
  • Listening to: Crows in my window
  • Watching: Black over black
  • Drinking: Crimson amber
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:iconedgar-chan:
las comisiones la mera verdad se acaban muy rapido!
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Leaglem Oct 3, 2012  Student Digital Artist
;A; *compra todos los tomates para que nadie se atreva a lanzarlos.... Y los acaricia tras la cuspide trifasica* ;a;a;a;a;sdasdhfjalsfjhlasdkhlkHSADFHAKSDHLFKASDHKFAHLSDKFHASDLFJAHSDKFHKAS FFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFF


FDSJKGSHLDFGKSDHFKS

SDHFJASHDK
DSJFK
SDFKL

DSAFJK
DJFKLGSDFLG;SD
DFGLSD;GJSDFLG'S;DLFJASKDHLFAS
SDJLFA;GSDLFKJG;SHFKVDFMGHSDFHGKS;D

me dash envidieshita ;u;u;u; *apapaxa la envidia y she la lanza a su femela femelosha y femelienta*

;m;m;m;m;m;m;mm;m;m;m;m;m;m;m;m;m;m;m;m;mm;m;m;m;
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BokuRaC Oct 3, 2012   Digital Artist
wheeeeeeeee te ushto? >v< :la: *roba uno de los tomates trifasticientes*

awww no tienesh nada que envidiar helmanita >3< *le muerde una oreja panificada*
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:iconalvi-chi:
this is a great poem ; u ;
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BokuRaC Oct 3, 2012   Digital Artist
do you really think so ;u;? thanks!
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:iconalvi-chi:
i really do~ Anytime
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:iconyazahmed77:
yeahh, this is a wonderful poem! great work (: x ~
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BokuRaC Sep 29, 2012   Digital Artist
;U; THANKS...maybe someday I will be able to understand it 8D XD
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mysteredelanuit Sep 29, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
That is amazing!! Please post it as art, it deserves it, especially in english!!!!!!
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BokuRaC Sep 29, 2012   Digital Artist
LOL wh...really? XDD I mean...even I look at it and see a crazy/frustrated writer trying to do a poem XD (or something similar)
at least I guess that mean the english is not that bad, right? XD
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